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Just some RPG like character designs just for the shit of it, something seems real off with the colors, i cant quite put my finger on it, and im not sure if i like it or not

Also dudes arm is way too stiff and it doesnt look like girls holding that gun

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:iconstottt:
pretty stinkin great designs!! i love that the little girl has the huge gun,, its deffinately a nice touch to make the character "POP"!!

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:iconkoufuyo:
Oh yes, very interesting and lively indeed....However the heroine's gun looks rather flat.
:iconwadefurlong:
is that a bannana on his side? HA He man I like the designs, you can always correct the other stuff later....

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I think the reason the arm looks stiff is due to the armoured gauntlet; its like a piece off an old iron stove. The guy's backpack also lacks shading, which isn't much of an eyesore but kind of puts the rest of the coloring off.

The girl seems fine, though I agree about the gun, with one additional reason: looks too flat. Doesn't seem to have dimension.

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:iconskaffa:
so when are we hittin up a collab?

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:icondawgmastas:
The colors seem fine, but buddies arm seems a little short.

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:iconginjirou:
I agree with your own crits and the crit that the gun is pretty flat; this pic looks good as is, but tweaking those things would be a good idea to make it really stand out
the angles and poses are great

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the designs are great!
the colors are fine to me; perhaps you feel that the red is a little too bold against the characters' predominant whiteness?
how about a pale violet instead? or a more pastel red?

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