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Zombehsby ~Lysol-Jones

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I bet brains taste terrible.

Critique by *artjte Apr 28, 2009, 5:43:27 PM

love your still but zombies with yellow construction guy that is my main problem.
shadows and figures look spot on but the Zombies could use more rote.
the eyes are good on the guys but a little to big on the girls hole and menacing but the brow expressions on the guys is more menacing.
and I'm not shore about this but zombie foot ware with oozing and liquifying orgens i think could look darker and dirty-er.
more root on a zombie is always a good thing but some times goes to fare but for your still this level seams just right but the business guy should have more tares or stains to his clothing.

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Critique by ~Mischproinc Apr 28, 2009, 4:22:03 PM

well, the only things that come to mind are in the wounds on the zombies, some bones should be poking out. For instance, the brown haired zombie woman's top arm wound should have part of her bone visible. Likewise, the business man zombie's skull would be visible in that claw wound. However, if you are looking to exaggerate, try making the forearm on bald zombie bulk out more to emphasize the strength factor. (At least that's how I see him, he kinda comes off as a powerful zombie) Also, the female zombie's lips are kinda throwing me for a loop. With the sunken face, it kinda feels odd that their lips are out like that. If you feel dead set to keep the lips, try not sinking in the face. Good Luck and I hope to see more with these characters.